Posted by Anonymous

The Walrus

The Walrus
My skin is a bag of wrinkles.
My tusks are like spears.
My sand paper skin soaks up the heat,of the warm rocks as I chill on the stoney beach.
I breath laziness.
I’m a quick flex of exhaustion.

Comments

  1. AnonymousOctober 24, 2017 at 4:13 PM

    I really like how you described the walrus. I thought it was great how you said the walrus breaths laziness. Perhaps next time you could write a bit more.

    Here is a link to my blog https://odsciarank.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousOctober 25, 2017 at 1:25 PM

    WOW WOW WOW!! this is sooo good! theirs nothing much too improve

    ReplyDelete
  3. AnonymousNovember 12, 2017 at 3:24 PM

    Cool! I like how you said 'I'm a quick flex of exhaustion' . Maybe next time you could write an explanation on why you put it up on your blogger. I also really like how you pulled the reader in with your first sentence.

    Check out my blog!
    https://odsangelinar1.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousNovember 26, 2017 at 5:33 PM

      I put it on my blog because it went in the news letter and I was very proud of it

      Delete
  4. AnonymousNovember 26, 2017 at 5:42 PM

    Great job Ethan You are amazing at writing no wonder it got it in the news letter.
    Keep up the amazing work for ever. But maybe you could make it a little bit longer?
    Check out my SNAZZY blog!!!
    https://odslilad.blogspot.co.nz

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular Posts